Gather round, children, for a wondrous tale! A long, long time ago, on the plane known as Dominaria, there was a tribe of Minotaurs who lived in the Hurloon mountains. They were fierce fighters, and would sing great songs after battle. One day, a young minotaur was born, and his name was Raskad. Raskad showed not only great skill at hitting things, but also had wondrous magical prowess. He could channel incredible amounts of blue, black, red and green mana into great, chaotic tempests. He would take his enemies' weapons and arsenal, and magically bring them to his and his friends sides, and eventually became the leader of his tribe. Charging into battle with his trusty hammer, his magic became stronger and stronger, until, one day, he fought a cowardly traitor and died with honour in battle. THE END
@Corwinn: Thanks. As I'm not a premium member, it's a lot of work to fix; so definitely will leave them as is at this point. Plenty of time to change my mind.... LOL
In the collaboration set I'm working on with @LittleDemon , @Felwynd , and @TrippleBoggey3 , Crawgate is, if you like, the capital of the plane. It was discovered By Explorer Ternius several thousand years ago, and a statue rests of her in Ternius Square.
The elf explorer, legend says, braved many difficulties, including monstrous krakens, like the Sea-Maw, pirates, like Gem's father's crew, and hostile merfolk to discover the city. In the first few years, the city was a beacon of hope to the harsh, lawless lands around, where strength and power dominated. In its ninth year, however, the elf left, seeking greater bounty in other lands. This left a counsel in charge, all members the wisest scholars in Crawgate.
The first few leaders were good and wise rulers, always fair. The sixth, however, was corrupt, and became addicted to gambling. Soon, the city became a refuge for rogues, thieves and pirates alike.
Now, hundreds of years in the future, little has changed. While the navy, led by Governor Tharlin Wyrmward have taken control of the city, pit fights and battles in the street are a common occurrence.
Entropy, an avatar of the chaotic forces within Shadowmoor, resurfaces as the Great Aurora transforms the land, amplifying its maddening, warping power.
This is my change on General Salomeras —> She has a new name (It just looks better in the card text) —> She is now female —> She is reworded (close to the "kicker mechanic") —> Her abilities now fit better to the "color pie
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BACKSTORY TIME!
Gather round, children, for a wondrous tale! A long, long time ago, on the plane known as Dominaria, there was a tribe of Minotaurs who lived in the Hurloon mountains. They were fierce fighters, and would sing great songs after battle. One day, a young minotaur was born, and his name was Raskad. Raskad showed not only great skill at hitting things, but also had wondrous magical prowess. He could channel incredible amounts of blue, black, red and green mana into great, chaotic tempests. He would take his enemies' weapons and arsenal, and magically bring them to his and his friends sides, and eventually became the leader of his tribe. Charging into battle with his trusty hammer, his magic became stronger and stronger, until, one day, he fought a cowardly traitor and died with honour in battle.
THE END
LORE:
In the collaboration set I'm working on with @LittleDemon , @Felwynd , and @TrippleBoggey3 , Crawgate is, if you like, the capital of the plane. It was discovered By Explorer Ternius several thousand years ago, and a statue rests of her in Ternius Square.
The elf explorer, legend says, braved many difficulties, including monstrous krakens, like the Sea-Maw, pirates, like Gem's father's crew, and hostile merfolk to discover the city. In the first few years, the city was a beacon of hope to the harsh, lawless lands around, where strength and power dominated. In its ninth year, however, the elf left, seeking greater bounty in other lands. This left a counsel in charge, all members the wisest scholars in Crawgate.
The first few leaders were good and wise rulers, always fair. The sixth, however, was corrupt, and became addicted to gambling. Soon, the city became a refuge for rogues, thieves and pirates alike.
Now, hundreds of years in the future, little has changed. While the navy, led by Governor Tharlin Wyrmward have taken control of the city, pit fights and battles in the street are a common occurrence.
First ever entry for a contest. Hope it's a good card.
Entropy, an avatar of the chaotic forces within Shadowmoor, resurfaces as the Great Aurora transforms the land, amplifying its maddening, warping power.
Blue out for White perhaps?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/angel-of-oblivion?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/scarecrow-60?list=user
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http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/rukl-king-of-speed-1?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kraine-false-king?list=user
3. Each user is allowed two (2) entries.
XD
My real entries are numero dos and numbre trois.
Neither am I! But look what it says:
'If for some reason you can't get your prize (you are too young, you live outside the US) we will work out an alternate digital prize for you.'
I'm hoping that means premium membership or something like that.
This is my change on General Salomeras
—> She has a new name (It just looks better in the card text)
—> She is now female
—> She is reworded (close to the "kicker mechanic")
—> Her abilities now fit better to the "color pie
entry 2: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/jaina-harnesser-of-the-sea
Simple and sweet.
Perhaps he could be {x}{w/b}{r/g} with lower P/T?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/rurl-foe-of-purgatory-1
Transforms into/from:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/laura-and-laurice-unbound
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cyraeleon-assasin-of-the-sea
second entry:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/evangeline-clan-leader