There are many ways to counter that card with removal or creatures to block because it's toughness is not too high. Also, it gives other players access to blue if they need it, so I don't think it is too OP considering these and it's CMC. But thanks for responding!
I really like Akkan, Netherworld Tyrant, but I think he may be too overpowered. Three bodies with deathtouch for six mana and a creature dying seems just too good. Plus, he could be broken with ETB triggers with Nekrataal.
Jarbosh, Netherworld Fiend looks a bit awkward with lifelink, as you can keep on paying the seven life you got last turn. Maybe if you added "tap Jarbosh, Netherworld Fiend, and you lose 7 life" or some clause like that.
Toyohisa the Immovable seems to be breaking the color pie. Just look at Undergrowth Champion. My best advice would be to either change his color to Green or to replace the second ability with something more white.
Primordial Ancient is pretty powerful with Flash. Instant speed boardwipes are pretty potent in today's metagame. I would suggest removing Flash, as it isn't a Red ability.
Shortcut seems rather familiar...
Forgotten Shrine looks perfect in a Bogles deck. Overall, I like this card the most out of all of these cards. Nice work!
Overall, the first two gods seem a bit underpowered. On Kateleon, I would suggest giving first strike to all creatures you control instead of trample for the "red" aspect of the card, and maybe increasing the power to 8.
On Litenos, to make the card more interesting, I would change the last ability to "Whenever a spell is cast, if it is the third spell cast this turn, its owner chooses one" That will make multiplayer interesting!
I like Erif the most out of these gods. I think that he is fine. If anything, I would add more blue to the card to emphasize the fact that he is 4-colored, not just BRG with Blue to make him more difficult to cast.
@Rednaxela, I agree with @Gelectrode, they're all too underpowered. Despite that you get a pretty decent body along with the effect, along with them being indestructible; the effects seem a bit generic even though they are slightly different.
Starting with Kateleon the ability is fine, and the p/t is quite nice as well along with the indestructibility, but it's missing something on the red side. Maybe giving first strike while it's animated?
Litenos is a bit generic, the number of spells cast trigger is unique to UR, but the options for the ability are also UR overall making it more of a UR card. The ability to hit any permanent is nice and fits with the colors, but just creature damage doesn't cut it for god tier. Maybe something that works with life gain/loss?
Finally Erif, again, the ability is far from generic but too weak for god tier being that it works off of your advantage it would be more WBRG for this type of effect. Being that UBRG was the cascade mechanic maybe something along the lines of massive situational card draw, or self damage for mass damage based removal on the board.
Tried a new design, still making legendary creatures with a bunch of text XD I've always been a big fan of chaos in the form of mass exile/situational card draw. I tried putting the clause "Creatures dealt damage by Zni that would die are exiled instead." but it takes up too much space.
@Gelectrode@Emeraldragon17 Thanks for the advise! For Litenos, combining both of your suggestions, what about 'whenever a player casts their third spell each turn, they may choose one: -Return target permanent to its owner's hand -Each opponent loses 4 life and you gain 4 life.
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It's a cool card, but it Somewhat OP.
There are many ways to counter that card with removal or creatures to block because it's toughness is not too high. Also, it gives other players access to blue if they need it, so I don't think it is too OP considering these and it's CMC. But thanks for responding!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/archangel-of-flames-1?list=set&set=16259
For being simple, what do you think about it?
It's just an average card and is very similar vampire nighthawk. http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=185707
Comparing the two, I think you could have it be an average card at 4 CMC, or a good card (for an uncommon) at three CMC.
@Mellenius. It's a cool, interesting card. Don't know what else to say about it
Contraptions! They definitely need some work, so feedback is appreciated! ^ ^
I really like Akkan, Netherworld Tyrant, but I think he may be too overpowered. Three bodies with deathtouch for six mana and a creature dying seems just too good. Plus, he could be broken with ETB triggers with Nekrataal.
Jarbosh, Netherworld Fiend looks a bit awkward with lifelink, as you can keep on paying the seven life you got last turn. Maybe if you added "tap Jarbosh, Netherworld Fiend, and you lose 7 life" or some clause like that.
Toyohisa the Immovable seems to be breaking the color pie. Just look at Undergrowth Champion. My best advice would be to either change his color to Green or to replace the second ability with something more white.
Primordial Ancient is pretty powerful with Flash. Instant speed boardwipes are pretty potent in today's metagame. I would suggest removing Flash, as it isn't a Red ability.
Shortcut seems rather familiar...
Forgotten Shrine looks perfect in a Bogles deck. Overall, I like this card the most out of all of these cards. Nice work!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kyuss-unsurper-of-o-kagachi
Sweet! So many infinite combos!
Infinite Mana (for every category):
Prismatic Omen
Reef Shaman
(etc. etc. etc.)
Infinite Power/Toughness:
Mystic Might (That's a cool one)
Forbidden Lore
Infinite Damage:
Barbed Field
Infinite Life Loss:
Caustic Tar
Infinite Tapping:
Debtor's Pulpit
Infinite Damage Prevention:
Flowering Field
Hot Springs
Unblockable:
Hostile Realm
Infinite Repeatable Boardwipe:
Noxious Field
Infinite Haste:
Racecourse Fury
This list, too, is almost infinite!
{ut}: Add one mana of any color to your mana pool. Activate this ability only once each turn.
Ja, I was thinking of something like that.
I was also thinking of:
Elvish ______ G
Creature - Elf Mystic
ut: Add G to your mana pool.
1/1
You'll end up with another nearly infinite set of infinite combos...
Overall, the first two gods seem a bit underpowered. On Kateleon, I would suggest giving first strike to all creatures you control instead of trample for the "red" aspect of the card, and maybe increasing the power to 8.
On Litenos, to make the card more interesting, I would change the last ability to "Whenever a spell is cast, if it is the third spell cast this turn, its owner chooses one" That will make multiplayer interesting!
I like Erif the most out of these gods. I think that he is fine. If anything, I would add more blue to the card to emphasize the fact that he is 4-colored, not just BRG with Blue to make him more difficult to cast.
Thanks to @DomriKade for some feedback on Kyuss! Does this work?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kyuss-usurper-of-virtues
Starting with Kateleon the ability is fine, and the p/t is quite nice as well along with the indestructibility, but it's missing something on the red side. Maybe giving first strike while it's animated?
Litenos is a bit generic, the number of spells cast trigger is unique to UR, but the options for the ability are also UR overall making it more of a UR card. The ability to hit any permanent is nice and fits with the colors, but just creature damage doesn't cut it for god tier. Maybe something that works with life gain/loss?
Finally Erif, again, the ability is far from generic but too weak for god tier being that it works off of your advantage it would be more WBRG for this type of effect. Being that UBRG was the cascade mechanic maybe something along the lines of massive situational card draw, or self damage for mass damage based removal on the board.
Tried a new design, still making legendary creatures with a bunch of text XD I've always been a big fan of chaos in the form of mass exile/situational card draw. I tried putting the clause "Creatures dealt damage by Zni that would die are exiled instead." but it takes up too much space.
Side note - I'm trying to comment on the cards in this thread as I find time. Typically I'll put them on the cards themselves.
Mysterious card: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/the-one-eyed?list=user
-Return target permanent to its owner's hand
-Each opponent loses 4 life and you gain 4 life.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/waiting-ape
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/firucane-1
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/clawinged-dragon