Callous' Card Feedback (aka I Will Give Feedback)

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• Victator

  May 2015

  A mechanic here, too. I absolutely love the idea I came up with, but I was wondering if there were a shorter (and maybe better?) way of saying it. Also, any ideas for the name of the mechanic? Thanks ahead of time.
  
  Leviathan of the Storm
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/leviathan-of-the-storm-1?list=user#.VUnZD_lViko
  
  Here is the original card I made that I based this mechanic off of:
  Charge Power
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/charge-power?list=user#.VUnZU_lViko
  
• Callous

  May 2015

  @ChargingBadger @LONEvvolf @qarsi-seer
  
  Commented. Cheers.
• Callous

  May 2015

  @Victator
  
  Commented.
• LocoTetra

  May 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/arbiter-of-hell-nasus?list=user#.VUq8-elFBYc
  I'm new magic player and card maker so this'll prob be really bad but gotta get criticism to learn
• Beeswax

  May 2015

  I'm having a really hard time judging the power level here. Is it way worse than Chaos Warp, since you can't use it as removal? Is it a little better, since you can dig more specifically? What do you think? Thanks!
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mirror-pierce?list=user#.VVAQMtpVikp
• Stylinator8

  May 2015 edited May 2015

  Greetings, Callous! I'm quite new here, I've actually just arrived over a week ago, and I thought I'd share some of my card ideas. Granted, I these cards probably aren't very good competitively, as this is my first time creating such cards. I tried to make them as balanced as I could, but there are probably going to be more than a few bad ones. Here is an example:
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/deploy-the-drones-1?list=user#.VVAo7o5Viko
• strongbelieves

  May 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cruel-offering
• Stylinator8

  May 2015 edited May 2015

  Hey, Callous, I know I only just commented already, but I thought you might give some critique on a created card I consider to be my personal favorite. It probably won't fare any better than the last one though. Here it is:
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/counterbolt?list=user#.VVDa-45Viko
  
  One last question: Is it okay if I modify Deploy the Drones to be a lot less overpowered? I know this comes across as kind of petty, but I kinda like the flavor behind it, even though the actual card is quite crap right now.
• Callous

  May 2015 edited May 2015

  @stlinator8 What you do is up to you - All I'm saying is that blue is the weakest and less frequent token color and I don' think there is more than one or two "put ~ token(s) on the battlefield" cards in blue.
  
  Think "Raise the Alarm", which is a white instant for 2, that puts 2 1/1 tokens down. I can't think of a single blue card that does effects like that off the top of my head.
  The most recent blue token producer is "Master of the Waves" and he made mono-blue tokens pretty big during Theros standard.
  
  Notorious Throng is also... "recent". Well, it's modern legal at least. And puts X tokens onto the field, where X is equal to the damage done to your opponent this turn, which means that it's super weak in monoblue, and probably has to be played with a more damage-centric color.
  
  The way to pull off a good blue token card is to make sure it is not unconditional, do something that makes it more interactive, that urges the blue player to splash/play unconventional blue (Master of the waves did that by forcing you to play a lot of blue permanents, which blue generally doesn't do)
  
  Your card, your decision.
• strongbelieves

  May 2015

  Do you think my integrated counter-silence is too cheap? I thought requiring three different colors might make it worth it but I am considering adding 1-2 colorless:
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/arcane-supremacy
• Damnation

  May 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/overgrown-passage#.VVS4TfnF_IY
  
  Mostly interested if this is worthy of any attention in something other than a deck that plays Loam.
• MrRansom

  May 2015

  I'd love it if you could offer any insights on the wording of this card:
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fallen-seraphs-grasp?list=user#.VVdThoJdU8o
  
  I think it does what I want it to do, but I think the wording may be wrong...
  
  Thanks!
• deaincaelo

  May 2015

  Can you tell me what you think of my first card? There's lore behind it, I can talk about that if it helps.
  
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cheques-and-balances?list=user#.VVwcgEbUtpI
• MrRansom

  May 2015

  Once again, I feel like I got the wording wrong on this card: http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/selesnya-aristocrat-10?list=user#.VWHGB4JdU8o
  
  Any advice would be appreciated. I don't expect you to respond promptly, I am sure you are busy working on your new set (which I am excited to see).
  Cheers!
• MrRansom

  June 2015

  Bumpin'
• Latinas

  June 2015

  @Callous What about these?
  I'm just saying I only play 3 formats EDH, Modern, and Sealed
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/griffin-hatchlings?list=user#.VYs6cO1Viko
• Latinas

  June 2015

  @Callous one more please promise this is the last one
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/intelligent-sliver?list=user#.VY7N7-1Viko
• Praeyors

  June 2015

  Haven't made a card or played in months. But any good?
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/verasin-syra#.VY8UEflViko
• Gafratt01

  June 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/magistrates-machinations
  Um. Read this^
• Damnation

  July 2015

  Bump.
  
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tidal-songcaller-1?list=user#.VaJ8r38aySM
• Callous

  July 2015

  I'm back from an 8-day holiday to resume my duties, keep'em coming!
• RedRageMage

  July 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/shadewing-knifer?list=user#.Va135vlViko
  
  How about that one?
• jimmydude

  July 2015

  This 1st one I have's link is:
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/alsgamar-the-saintly?list=user#.Va18Vf9RGM8
• jimmydude

  July 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/attacked-by-wolves?list=user#.Va18r_9RGM8
• jimmydude

  July 2015

  Sorry I didn't mean to post two
• Rednaxela

  July 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/pertyu-of-the-plains-1?list=user#.Va1_GIvHH-0
• Damnation

  July 2015

  You can ignore the last one I posted, unless you already tried the link.
  Rolling Shockwave
  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/rolling-shockwave?list=user
  
  This one's really wordy. Any way to make it shorter?
• Oduda

  July 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/sasha-dragon-whisperer-1?list=user#.Va8upvm0dCg
• Philkeethus

  July 2015

  http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/yawgmoth-the-uneffable-1#.Va82lflVhBc first card I've made appreciate the feedback
• ExhaustedElox

  July 2015

  @Callous I don't have a specific card I'd like feedback on, rather an idea for a new set. The link for it is here:http://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/discussion/475/the-plane-of-malmornia-potentially-a-3-set-block#latest
  
  Please take a look and leave some comments over there.