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Thank you, mate.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/varlek-tzeentchs-chosen
Also I've made a third! Yes, a third planeswalker. It isn't an entry, although I think people would still like to see it here!
Lyrisse, Cosmic Painter
[Not an entry]
I fear this maybe OP.
Name: Eon Dagor, Hand of Mogis
Mana Cost: {r}{b}
Starting Loyalty: 2
+1: Deal 2 damage to target creature or player.
-3: Put 2 2/3 red minotaur creature tokens onto the battlefield.
-8: All opponents sacrifice an enchantment, planeswalker, and two creatures, then lose 10 life
There should also be an ability to add loyalty to it, as right now it's a one-time use card.
EDIT: Oh, shoot, I got ninja'd, this is awkward, can someone delete this comment?
(Can't seem to mention the user... Probably cause of the symbols in his name.)
I have made a revision to my entry... Jafar, Sorcerer Supreme.
It fixes various logical issues and makes it easier to read!
Jafar, Supreme Sorcerer
All old versions will be deleted on Jan 10, 2017!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kiel-envoy-of-silence
OP? Maybe! (Feedback appreciated).
Here is some constructive feedback if it may help you!
1) Planeswalker starts at too high of loyalty.
2) First ability is too easy to sustain.
3) Second ability doesn't work properly as planeswalker abilities are sorceries and you would need a lot of card text to make it work. Also it is unbalanced!
4) I don't even know how you thought this was balanced!
In short you need to practice making weak planeswalkers. Then, increase their strength through revision. Since you can't edit planeswalkers I would use Microsoft Word or something similar!
Hope this helps you find your ideal planeswalker balance!
Here's my first entry.
Entry 2
I apologize it just didn't come to mind at the moment! Won't do so again.
Entry 2
Changed them both for balancing.