5 Part Mega-Challenge - Part 2

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  • @jazipa Sorry but I'm gonna have to drop out. I recently got a job and I'm in the process of moving. I would've loved to be a part of it though.
  • @TrippleBoggey3 Seriously? You know what. It's fine. BUT: You will recieve 0 points for part one and will be marked down on part two. I'm sorry, but it's unfair to the people who actually listened and entered on time.
  • @jazipa I have not had any time to make anything yet...
  • Sorry @jazipa. Last week has been finals for just about everybody, and we really haven't had enough time to do this yet. I will get my entry in soon!
  • @Gelectrode I don't know what a final is... Is that an American thing?
  • @jazipa It's a large type of exam covering all the material that was to be learned in a large measure of schooling (18 weeks, to be precise) and counts for an astonishingly large portion of the cumulative score in the class. And students often take 6-8 of them, in a three day period, which demands a ton of studying.
  • So it's a final exam. @Lukijul
  • What's a final exam? @jazipa?
    XD
  • @jazipa
    I'm working on my story, just need to make some more cards...
  • My SECOND entry:

    *First of all, I would like to change the name of my plane to Aduun. The name just seems to fit the plane better than Akora. I hope you don't mind*

    [b]First Plot Point: Soulstone Mine[b]

    The plane of Aduum has been revolutionized by this strange mineral, but will it be for the better? Judging by what is happening on the plane, nope. This plot point introduces Soulstone to the players and readers, and will be implemented in a land card

    [b]Second Plot Point: Ajani's Resolution[b]

    In this multiverse, Ajani has never joined the Gatewatch. After all, why would he hang around such puny humans? In [b]this[b] multiverse, Ajani has planeswalked to Aduun due to reports of strong healing magic being present. In truth, these were simply misguided rumors about Soulstone. But when Ajani saw the massive war taking place on Aduun - over the 'healing magic' he thought would be beneficial to the plane, he vowed to stop the cataclysmic war over the soulstone. This plot point illustrates Ajani's horror and hope for a better plane.

    [b]Third Plot Point: Dack's Interests[b]

    Meanwhile, the planeswalker Dack Fayden has also traveled to Aduun interested simply by the sheer potential of this valuable Soulstone. True, Dack doesn't want for the citizens of Aduun to exploit the power of the Soulstone to their own ends - but mainly because he wants to. This plot point illustrates Dack's obsession bordering on greed over the power of the Soulstone.

    [b]Fourth Plot Point: Soul Engine[b]

    After linking much of the strife of the plane to Quent, the leader of Oath Eredor, he reveals that the insane leader of the Iounara System Nirra had been controlling much of the conflict to ensure that her 'project' would go undisturbed. And sure enough, when Ajani and Dack arrive, Nirra had just finished her greatest invention: the Soul Engine. This plot point illustrates the Soul Engine's ability to produce the 'spark' that makes planeswalkers planeswalkers.

    [b]Fifth Plot Point: Power Ploy[b]

    But during the final showdown between Nirra and her wayward assistants and the planeswalkers, Dack finds his opportunity. He allows the downfall and capture of Ajani while he activated the Soul Engine on himself, hoping to supercharge his 'spark' The result would change the multiverse forever. This plot point will emphasize Dack's greed for power over Ajani's battle to bring peace to Aduum.


    [b]Other important characters:[b]

    Ghara: Leader of the Dendrai Circuit She believes that all beings are inhabited by the spirits of their ancestors, and that the previous souls of the former leaders were in fact hers. Ghara looks for a way to control the endless cycle of life and death to her advantage, and Soulstone suits her purposes perfectly.

    Decree Malicious: Elemental-god of the Charr Infantry. His tyrannical rule is only held in check by his passion for bloodlust, often engaging pointless battles just to prove his legion's devotion.

    Hallan: Leader of the Berenn Sect. A master of healing magic, it is rumored that Hallan has never felt negative emotions, but has seen only the positive in Akora. He believes that Akora and all of its inhabitants owe the Berenn Sect an enormous favor for making it a "better" place.

    Sinkra Eldass: The discoverer of Soulstone. She is a powerful mage in service of the Iounara System and helped spread the seeds of dissent in the original Conduit.

    Is this good enough? If not, please ping me and I will try and fix it!
  • @Lujikul, @Gelectrode, @KrampisZman, @Joshman1435,@Idoclass, @dashdo101, @TrippleBoggey3 and @Gryphon11114

    RESULTS FOR PART 2:
    0 points: Lukijul, KrampisZman, Joshman1435, Idoclass, dashdo101 and Gryphon11114
    5 points: Gelectrode and TrippleBoggey3
  • @jazipa I had previously stated that I had to drop out of the competition. Apologies, but I assume you didn't see my other post?
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