Wow! So much is happening in this card! Here is a guide to fixing the card:
When YOU CAST SIEGE ON DEPTRONA, CREATE a 6/7 RED CREATURE TOKEN WITH "WHENEVER A DOMTAR SLAVE ENTERS THE BATTLEFIELD, SACRIFICE IT."
At the beginning of your upkeep, CREATE 5 RED 2/2 CREATURE TOKENS NAMED DOMTARIEN WITH "When this creature dies TARGET OPPONENT CREATES A RED 2/2 CREATURE TOKEN NAMED Domtar Slave.
Does that make sense?
Thoughts and advice? Worked hard to get the flavor right!
This is soon to be submitted to a very fun contest, but once I submit I can't make any revisions. Can I get some thoughts from y'all, the community, on this design? [Be sure to check the comment section!]
That'll eliminate the extra line of text and give both creatures protection instead of just Bellerophon.
been a while since I requested some input from my fellow smiths, but I would appreciate some comments on the formatting/workings of my current mechanic idea: Poltergeist.
Interesting card you got there! I like the concept of turning all colors of mana to blue mana. However, I am confused by the name. Is this the same Jace that completely wrecked 2011 Standard and has been annoying the crap out of me and other story buffs recently? And if so, I would highly suggest changing his name. Jace is a mind mage, not a water mage. Does that make sense?
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Wow! So much is happening in this card! Here is a guide to fixing the card:
When YOU CAST SIEGE ON DEPTRONA, CREATE a 6/7 RED CREATURE TOKEN WITH "WHENEVER A DOMTAR SLAVE ENTERS THE BATTLEFIELD, SACRIFICE IT."
At the beginning of your upkeep, CREATE 5 RED 2/2 CREATURE TOKENS NAMED DOMTARIEN WITH "When this creature dies TARGET OPPONENT CREATES A RED 2/2 CREATURE TOKEN NAMED Domtar Slave.
Does that make sense?
Thoughts and advice? Worked hard to get the flavor right!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/eidren-perfect-of-lys-alana-1
I figured losing cards is worse than losing life, and it would take a lot of effort/jank to break this.
Weird one;
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/haze-snake
One might be too tough, the other is definite weaksauce.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dark-hearse
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/accorders-bike
() = adding in words; [] = replacing words.
Non-Elf creatures (on the battlefield) [become] token creatures.
Ideas?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/moral-decay
Referencing both Tsoth Mora and Bjeldor Haerkenlaer (of @Animist's creation).
Did I word it right? It feels like I didn't.
Thanks!
This is soon to be submitted to a very fun contest, but once I submit I can't make any revisions.
Can I get some thoughts from y'all, the community, on this design? [Be sure to check the comment section!]
That'll eliminate the extra line of text and give both creatures protection instead of just Bellerophon.
(I did tell it to use the Theros set symbol, but it reverted...)
Interesting card you got there! I like the concept of turning all colors of mana to blue mana. However, I am confused by the name. Is this the same Jace that completely wrecked 2011 Standard and has been annoying the crap out of me and other story buffs recently? And if so, I would highly suggest changing his name. Jace is a mind mage, not a water mage. Does that make sense?
Can you please look at this card?
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mortuary-diabolist
This card any good?
Hyena infants are cubs and dog infants are puppies...
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Made with reference to:
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/hyjack
I created this. What do you think? Perhaps a bit too OP.
Gee thanks! Not OP in the least!
How'd you know? XD
You mentioned your birthday in the The Dimensions they are A-Changin': Timeshifted Contest so I decided to make something on that day.
You're welcome!
Woohoo! Thanks!
I knew I said that somewhere.