I really want to participate but at this point I have just completely lost the story and generally there has been hardly any participation. Might I recommend just starting a new story in a new thread and ending/closing this one?
Although another issue I have is that a lot of the writers in this put up sections with grammatical issues and/or storytelling issues. Too many characters were added too quickly and a some of the cards added to go along were of relatively low quality in terms of wording, formatting, and mechanics. There was also very little mechanical fluency with the set and it just seemed like we were adding cards and story sections we wanted to write rather than story sections that would advance the plot in the direction it was heading.
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Although another issue I have is that a lot of the writers in this put up sections with grammatical issues and/or storytelling issues. Too many characters were added too quickly and a some of the cards added to go along were of relatively low quality in terms of wording, formatting, and mechanics. There was also very little mechanical fluency with the set and it just seemed like we were adding cards and story sections we wanted to write rather than story sections that would advance the plot in the direction it was heading.