Something to hate on mana rocks, mana dorks, and everything in between. Thoughts? Is this too aggressively costed?
Edit: costed it better; thank you, @Jonteman93! I left it at 2 CMC because I felt it is usually going to be worse than Blood Moon. In fact, I don't think this hurts many decks other than Elves or Devoted Company (against mana rocks, you'd rather use Stony Silence, which has a much wider application).
What do you think of the flavor text? Should I remove it alltogether and make more room for the rest of the card, or should I keep it, even though it makes the card a little bit too crowded?
@KalamMekhar I agree with @Tomigon here. For a two mana drop that converts counters into poison counters, this effect can be debilitating. Especially considering most energy decks don't have a way to stop themselves from gaining energy counters (or experience counters are the same way in commander, cause it's not a, you may get an X counter), I think that for two mana, the card could benefit by adding some way to avoid the effect until end of turn. Either life loss, discard, or sac a creature might all be valid options (i think life loss is probably the best option too).
@Tomigon and @RohanDragoon: I've altered it, check it out. You were right, it hates a little too hard; I allowed my bad experiences in Standard to blind me XD
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Something to hate on mana rocks, mana dorks, and everything in between. Thoughts? Is this too aggressively costed?
Edit: costed it better; thank you, @Jonteman93! I left it at 2 CMC because I felt it is usually going to be worse than Blood Moon. In fact, I don't think this hurts many decks other than Elves or Devoted Company (against mana rocks, you'd rather use Stony Silence, which has a much wider application).
All fear the Cuddle Bear!
With the bear not being your friend the game shall never end!
Check out the Set.
This is a bit of a combo.
Nice card!
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/omeric-sporoloth-shepherd
I need a bit of help with this. I have not played Commander, so I don't know the kind of power level or gameplay that is required.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fog-wraith?list=user
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/bolt-the-bird-3
Three new designs:
There's some comments on Omeric.
@TenebrisNemo, Caron seems like a red/green creature.
I'd say the formatting is more important than flavor text. Flavor text should always be used to fill extra space once the card is designed.
Thoughts? Is this too, um, hateful?
Someone pointed out this ability should say "if you've cast".
But werewolf cards or Archmage Ascension don't use perfect tense. I really don't know.
How about "Any player may pay 3 life for that player to ignore this effect until end of turn."?
I agree with @Tomigon here. For a two mana drop that converts counters into poison counters, this effect can be debilitating. Especially considering most energy decks don't have a way to stop themselves from gaining energy counters (or experience counters are the same way in commander, cause it's not a, you may get an X counter), I think that for two mana, the card could benefit by adding some way to avoid the effect until end of turn. Either life loss, discard, or sac a creature might all be valid options (i think life loss is probably the best option too).
Thoughts? Should it be worded 'other white and/or blue creatures'? Should it cost 4? Should it be mono-white? Should I stop asking annoying questions?