I'm working on a set, I'd like some feedback on the mythics. I can say for a fact "One With The Prophecy" is getting buffed, cause twenty counters feels like an eternity considering the power it gives.
@TenebrisNemo, what a complex and fun commander! My only suggestion is to merge the last sentence of Eilian Silent Wind so it is like "Scry X, where X is the tapped creature's power, then you may..."
@TheAcidicSniper, regarding One With the Prophecy, the first line should read "Your library and permanents you control can't be the target of spells and abilities your opponents control." And yes, drawing 20 cards will be very difficult in Red/White, especially trying to flip it in advance. Maybe seven?
@KalamMekhar, yes I believe other white and/or blue creatures would work better than "other white and blue" because that suggests it only is affecting dual-color white-blue creatures.
However, I cannot discern your intent for the card, so...
I made this commander for my friend...does it seem broken because I sorta think it is but I do not know how to fix it...it worked fairly well when played.
@Damnation you could make it a 13/9 and leave the cost at 9... Take out the shroud but add haste and trample. And make it so each opponenet just loses nine life or maybe eight, and then it would be better I think
@TenebrisNemo, the Tavern seems fine, but I am confused by Elidyr doesn't have a ping ability. Most archers in the past have some sort of noncombat damage feature.
Hi, I actually made this card for another challenge, but it just closed, so I will post it here. It was for that warrior tournament challenge thing. Thought a Dragon Wizard themed after Charizard would be better than an Elf Mage...
Comments
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/relic-1?list=set&set=21275
@TheAcidicSniper, regarding One With the Prophecy, the first line should read "Your library and permanents you control can't be the target of spells and abilities your opponents control." And yes, drawing 20 cards will be very difficult in Red/White, especially trying to flip it in advance. Maybe seven?
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/serra-squire
Just something that popped into my head. Thoughts?
However, I cannot discern your intent for the card, so...
General thoughts in comments, as always.
- Does it do too much? It does cost 9, so...
I made this commander for my friend...does it seem broken because I sorta think it is but I do not know how to fix it...it worked fairly well when played.
Suggestions?
Take out the shroud but add haste and trample.
And make it so each opponenet just loses nine life or maybe eight,
and then it would be better I think
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/chromatic-conscript
Think it'd be better if it made the Steam-Powered colors only {r}{w}{u} and kept the same cost.
Is deceive to strong?...
This is for a set I am making...it is supposed to contain a new ability for each guild currently this is Dimir's New ability.
Thoughts?
See the card's page for hidden flavor text!
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Just a card I made, I have no idea if it would be any good but it could certainly make for some interesting plays.
Is this worded correctly?
Is this too stupid?
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/behold-my-masterpiece
@KalamMekhar I did the same with Spirit of Holi
Thoughts?
Thanks, I'll see it faster if you reply to one of my comments
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