@Faiths_Guide it's costed correctly and it should indeed be a sorcery. The flavor is excellent, if discomforting. It could be an uncommon. I like it a lot.
"Red Jenny" is a secret society from Dragon Age, not an actual person. I need some help determining the creature subtype and color for this card. I'm happy with it now but I know it could be a little better.
@jpastor, nice design! My first suggestion is to consider a less clunky name, as "Imagine Eldrazi" sounds like a one-up of a popular band. Might I suggest "Cerebral Caress"?
Also, "his or her" has recently been updated to "their."
@Scott_Anderson maybe since the friends of red jenny is an organization it should be a small series of cards like 4, with sera from inquisition being the legendary? but besides my small suggestion a 3/4 creature with vigilance seems pretty op bc the low mana cost maybe increasing the cost by {1} or what if the shuffle ability happened automatically?
maybe the creature type could be Human Rogue and maybe the mana type should be green/black/red since the friends of red jenny have been known to do assassin type work
@Corwinnn, really cool design! It may not even need the black mana in the CMC, although this would not warrant the super duper spiffy colored artifact borders!
@TenebrisNemo, nice flavor, but haste is not typically in Green's color pie. Also, Howling Alpha's CMC reduction ability seems redundant since Lost Cubs is already castable by the time their parents etb. What about a reverse-Lost Cubs ability? (if your team controls a creature with power less)
@Gelectrode - I gave it haste intentionally because I wanted to post it into a certain contest that demands rare keywords on certain colors. Reverse-Lost Cubs ability would've been a brighter idea.
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i also made the other lords of hell you can check them out here https://mtgcardsmith.com/user/Djayhero/sets/31368
The templating should say "create a red 3/1 Elemental creature token for each point of damage prevented in this way."
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/interrogate-1
"Red Jenny" is a secret society from Dragon Age, not an actual person. I need some help determining the creature subtype and color for this card. I'm happy with it now but I know it could be a little better.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/imagine-eldrazi-1
Also, "his or her" has recently been updated to "their."
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ms-agritha-wicklethig-teacup
maybe the creature type could be Human Rogue and maybe the mana type should be green/black/red
since the friends of red jenny have been known to do assassin type work
Here is her updated card: https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/red-jenny
Thoughts on my own colored artifact?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/twisted-renovation
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/frostmourne-6?list=user
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/helm-of-domination-1
Questions? Complaints? im thinking of creating a set and printing it out. but before i waste ink, i need to know if i should change any of the three.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/armari-enchantment-host?list=user
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/undead-flagbearer
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ladi-upper-edge
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/greet-stranger
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/representatives-of-the-sand
Thoughts on the flavor of my own partners?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/inspired-hero
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tale-of-tenacity-1
Your partners are way better.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/clockspinners-gambit