I think that is an excellent mirrored pair. I have only a few minor comments:
1) The forged equipment should be named sword/shield, not have the sword/shield subtype 2) For aesthetic purposes, Sword Master should be a 3/1 to match Shield Master.
@jpastor mostly because it is for the legendary tribal sorcery Circuit challenge which required a subtype for the legendary spell. Also, fksvorfully it depicts Heliod killing Elspeth so God fits
Know that feeling @scott_anderson... I work on a school for special pupils.. And in the school breaks i sit in the school garden with my block and write down new ideas
@TenebrisNemo about moltensteel dancer: it feels very situation based for its ability after its been out for more than 1 turn. I can see it being incredibly powerful or vice versa in later turns. You would need a way to manipulate your life total for this card to have continuing effect. Cards that could determine this cards balance are cards like soul conduit or others that exchange life totals or drain them like havoc festival. but then theres a lot of cards in the game that this can be abused from! I would experiment with it until i came up with a vicious combo.
The artwork is sweet. The ability you came up with does work well with the art for flavorfulness. This feels like a real card and looks fun to play. Cool card man!
@sorinace Better wording should be, whenever a warrior enters the battlefield under your team's control, it gains first strike, lifelink, and haste until the end of turn.
And doesn't assist have to be the full colorless mana?
I'm having trouble telling whether this is playable in draft, playable in standard, playable in modern, or broken. I think it would be really good in commander.
I really can't tell. It's a hard card for me to judge. Can someone help?
Thanks Sylux. I don’t think Tormenting Ancestor is playable to be honest. The cost is too high. There are plenty of spells that draw you cards, and none of the playable ones have such a steep cost.
@daveottley This would be fairer if the life loss was like 2 or 3 per turn. Putting this kind of clock on the game on a shrouded enchantment seems too strong.
Dominaria border on a non-dominaria card? hmmmmmmmmmm. I think the {t} should be on the other side of the mana symbols.
Trying to create a new line of colorless creatures, ones that are simply born in a toxic wasteland, thus they are devoid. This one happens to be a new creature type... Merwolf = Merfolk + Wolf
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Thought I'd make an un-card!:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/toxi-woxi
Really cool mechanic
Maybe make it "its an blue spirit wolf in addition to its other types"?
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/living-armor-2?list=set&set=30458
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/captain-hibbertly-squalls
Thoughts?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kite-festival
Behold!
I think that is an excellent mirrored pair. I have only a few minor comments:
1) The forged equipment should be named sword/shield, not have the sword/shield subtype
2) For aesthetic purposes, Sword Master should be a 3/1 to match Shield Master.
What do you all think of this card:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/necrocore
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dark-magicians-tomb
Upgraded Version
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dark-magicians-tome?list=user
On to the card. It's going to sound like a mean thing to say but I actually like the card, so keep that in mind:
it's a very bad card. You get three cards, but then your opponent makes you lose your two best cards - or at least one of your best cards.
This is almost as bad as Arcane Denial.
By the way, it's ok to make bad cards. Bad cards that do something interesting sometimes become really good cards.
Here's a dancer:
The artwork is sweet. The ability you came up with does work well with the art for flavorfulness. This feels like a real card and looks fun to play. Cool card man!
Thoughts on my warrior 'hug' monument?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/warriors-monument
And doesn't assist have to be the full colorless mana?
Thoughts on my Illusion Removal?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/reality-hall
I really can't tell. It's a hard card for me to judge. Can someone help?
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/leyline-emerald
That card could be worded a bit better, other than that it's a pretty cool concept and would play it in ramp heavy decks anytime.
So I recently tried to sort of rebalance Ancestral Recall although I feel like I just made it stronger.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tormenting-ancestor
Printable? Yes! Playable? No.
Thoughts on my card? I've never made a good card with bestow before.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/leafborn-cub
Commented on your card!
Thoughts?
Trying to create a new line of colorless creatures, ones that are simply born in a toxic wasteland, thus they are devoid.
This one happens to be a new creature type... Merwolf = Merfolk + Wolf