I am Trying to Create Balanced Cards. I Would Appreciate Your Input!

First Card:
 Wilderness Redistribution  {6},{g}

Sorcery
Affinity for Basic Lands
Abilities may not trigger from the effects of this spell.
Gather all lands on the battlefield and in graveyards, shuffle them, and deal them back out in clockwise order starting with the person to the left of you. When a player receives a card in this way, that player puts that card onto the battlefield under their control. The first X lands to enter the battlefield in this way enter tapped, where X is the number of players multiplied by the amount of mana spent to cast this spell.


I may also need to change the wording,as I may not have kept with actual magic terminology all throughout this card.

Comments

  • hmmm let’s see

    i think the part that says “ deal them back out in clockwise order starting with the person to the left of you”  should be changed. you don’t know if the player might be left, right, in front or back, etc. make it more open to directions

    Other than that to me it looks grammatically correct! Take my advice with a little grain of salt as I’m not 100% sure on actual magic terminology either lol
  • @Blade_Ermonia
    Could you please just post it in here instead of flooding more similar discussions into the forums? https://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/index.php?p=/discussion/3627/post-your-cards-here-actually-see-what-others-think#latest Thanks. I wouldn't say this but recently a lot of new members have been creating lots of discussions exactly the same as yours and there is already a discussion for it.
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