@joemamajoe cool cards! Awesome idea for a mechanic on debt to the rich, and coo Idea on pact of dispelling. The only thing I can think of is the cost you need to pay on pact of dispelling seems a little high, maybe reduce the amount of cards drawn and the cost needed? Also, just a small thing, but I feel like the name pact of dispelling doesn't fit the card, it almost sounds like a counter spell, maybe pact of enlightenment or something?
@zizick123, awesome card! Only problem is the wording:
"When Kuzahn, the Wild Flame enters the battlefield, exile the top five cards of your library. Then, for each instant and/or sorcery card exiled this way, Kuzahn deals 1 damage to each opponent and each creature that player controls."
and,
"Whenever Kuzahn attacks, until end of turn, you may cast an instant or sorcery card exiled by it."
Remember, creatures aren't a 'him' or a 'her'. They are a 'it'.
Also, the mana cost is much too low. 3RR or 4RR would be better.
@joemamajoe Differ is interesting, I don't really see how that would become relevant most of the time. Sticking to the theme, you might want to add something else. It feels kind of useless.
@fire12 I feel like trample doesn't suit it. Maybe flip the card if it has three or more to a bigger creature with trample etc. I do like the +1/+1 on 1/1s though.
@v_OozeNinja_v Let's try not to post the same card more than once here (even if it's been edited). Doomed Offering doesn't really feel like "offering" suits it too well. It looks like you may have used the wording from the other "search everywhere and exile" cards, but, if you didn't, I would look at Unmoored Ego to double check that. While this does require an opponent to get a good card in their grave for it to work, this thing feels a bit too strong at 4 mana. Think about this against Uro: they play Uro turn 2-3 and then on turn 4 you exile every Uro in their deck and put 8 power and toughness worth of Horrors onto the battlefield. I think you need a lower limit to how many Horrors can be produced.
@v_OozeNinja_v I like him, and I know what you're going for, but you need to use the MTG verbiage and grammar to define what you mean by defending. "defender" and "blocking" and other words like that have specific meanings during a game, but the wording you're using is too vague to be understood, so you might want to tweak the text box a little. I think what you mean is like "Impervious Warden has indestructible as long as it is not your turn. If Impervious Warden blocked this turn, it has hexproof until your next end step." or something similar? Just my two cents
@Faiths_Guide I see no defects. Very well designed. Liked it Intelligenc Clique probably rare
@v_OozeNinja_v The card is cool, but has grammatical errors. ''as long as Impervious Warden blocking, it gains indestructible'' or something like this. My card: For the saga Tournament of Champions 3
@shadow123, Idea Keeper is much too good as you get free card draws a lot of the time with cards with 1 cycling cost. To balance it, it should say "Cycling abilities you activate cost up to 1 less to activate. This effect can't reduce the mana in that cost to less than one mana." and then cycling of the card should be lower as it is the definition of a cycling card. I think (1) or hybrid mana (G/U) would be fine. I love Swift denial! Really cool card design.
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Here is a card I'd like to have evaluated for a future contest. Just a general evaluation for it's functionality would be appreciated.
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/jale-infinite-stinger
So I haven't seen any legendary Jellyfishes so I thought I'd try go do that. Hope your guys like!
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AND,
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Here is my card:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/kuzahn-the-wild-flame
"When Kuzahn, the Wild Flame enters the battlefield, exile the top five cards of your library. Then, for each instant and/or sorcery card exiled this way, Kuzahn deals 1 damage to each opponent and each creature that player controls."
and,
"Whenever Kuzahn attacks, until end of turn, you may cast an instant or sorcery card exiled by it."
Remember, creatures aren't a 'him' or a 'her'. They are a 'it'.
Also, the mana cost is much too low. 3RR or 4RR would be better.
My cards:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/differ
and,
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/salvaging-search
Either comment on both (helpful feedback please) or give both a favorite (or one of each), then post one or two of your own. Thanks!
Based off of my 5e D&D Minotaur Barbarian....
First time making a level up card: Thoughts?
Faved it
Here is mine
Hope you guys enjoy!
For those of you who do not know, PendleHaven is a real magic card that is all about 1/1s. Here's a link: https://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Search/Default.aspx?action=advanced&name=+[pendelhaven]
@fire12 I feel like trample doesn't suit it. Maybe flip the card if it has three or more to a bigger creature with trample etc.
I do like the +1/+1 on 1/1s though.
Let's try not to post the same card more than once here (even if it's been edited).
Doomed Offering doesn't really feel like "offering" suits it too well. It looks like you may have used the wording from the other "search everywhere and exile" cards, but, if you didn't, I would look at Unmoored Ego to double check that. While this does require an opponent to get a good card in their grave for it to work, this thing feels a bit too strong at 4 mana. Think about this against Uro: they play Uro turn 2-3 and then on turn 4 you exile every Uro in their deck and put 8 power and toughness worth of Horrors onto the battlefield. I think you need a lower limit to how many Horrors can be produced.
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@DomriKade's contest:
https://forums.mtgcardsmith.com/discussion/5346/designers-gauntlet-week-3-sign-post-s-of-the-times#latest
Comment on the Clique or the Hoarder and/or give it a favorite, then post up to two cards of your own!
And I can rename it to sacrifice over offering. Thanks.
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Seems balanced. Pretty cool.
I like him, and I know what you're going for, but you need to use the MTG verbiage and grammar to define what you mean by defending. "defender" and "blocking" and other words like that have specific meanings during a game, but the wording you're using is too vague to be understood, so you might want to tweak the text box a little.
I think what you mean is like "Impervious Warden has indestructible as long as it is not your turn. If Impervious Warden blocked this turn, it has hexproof until your next end step." or something similar? Just my two cents
I see no defects. Very well designed. Liked it
Intelligenc Clique probably rare
@v_OozeNinja_v
The card is cool, but has grammatical errors.
''as long as Impervious Warden blocking, it gains indestructible'' or something like this.
My card:
For the saga Tournament of Champions 3
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mia-and-ryan-lockhart
My cards:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mirroring-realities?list=user
and,
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/trinket-toad?list=user
EDIT: @KrakenSalad, It didn't save. So I posted it again.
My cards:
My cards:
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/infinite-origins (Check the comments to know what the artifact type does)
and,
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/mirroring-realities
Hope yall like!
My cards:
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and,
https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/night-stampede
My cards: