Post Your Cards Here... Xplain Yoself

edited December 2020 in Custom Card Discussion
Post your newly created cards here with an explanation detailing the what, why, and how you made your card the way you did...

Then you may make one request from amongst the options below. The next person to post a card must fulfill your request to post their card. (If you opt to make no requests, the next person to share a new card can do so freely with no prerequisites).

(F) for Favorite = Please favorite my card before posting your card. (We shouldn't force people to favorite cards they don't like, but it's your request. A cardsmith following up this request does not need to fulfill this request to post their card.)

(D) for Disqus = Please comment on my card via Disqus and give it a rating before posting your card.

(C) for Critique = Please comment on this discussion when you post your card and offer any constructive feedback or compliments you may have.

(R) for Revision = Please recreate my card showing any edits you would make to mine, so that I may see how you feel it should look if you create it.

(O) for Optional Challenge = I don't care about my card, but I challenge the next cardsmith to create... (This challenge is optional. A cardsmith following up this request does not need to fulfill the request.)


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  • edited December 2020
    https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dizzyspell
    Explanation: 
    I had the idea of making someone draw useless cards that would still count towards their hand size and eventually force them to discard. I chose blue because I believe shuffling is common in blue. I chose this artwork because of the swirly things around her head... it made her look dizzy, hence the name dizzypell. I wanted this to recur, so I chose it to be an Enchantment. Mana cost 3 made sense because of the timing in the game. Common rarity because Dizzyspells are common.

    Request Critique
  • While I like all the other options, I don't think forcing [artificial] faves is necessarily something many people will want to do.

    Other than that, this sounds pretty cool!
  • edited December 2020
    I see. How is that @shadow123? See the amendment above :smile:
  • @jpastor That seems much better!
  • Awesome @jpastor, but...........

    It should be worded exactly like so:
    At the beginning of your upkeep, create two colorless Dizzy enchantment/artifact tokens with ...
    Why did I stop? Because of a slight problem.  When tokens leave the battlefield, they basically cease to exist. Cool concept overall, but it will present some problems in actual play.

    My card:
    Miller of the Dread-World

    https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/miller-of-the-dread-world

    I made this card as a start to an Eldrazi-Praetor set. I researched a lot of the eldrazi/praetor abilities. I realized that eldrazi focus on high cmc, while praetors seem to help you in one way and hurt your opponents in the same way.  I wanted to make it devoid, but there wasn't enough space on the card. *sigh*


    Now, for the next adventurer, I choose the optional challenge!  I challenge you to make a balanced tribal creature that is a 9/9 for 1 mana, aaaaannnnnnnnnddddd, you can't use suspend, slumber, or anything else that makes it take longer to become a creature.
  • edited December 2020



    I don't remember how to link artwork and I have a headache.

    Made it (obviously) in response to @AboveAndAbout's challenge above. Losing Power/toughness unless something was fulfilled was the first thing that came to mind when they said balanced 9/9 for 1. It's always a creature, it's just sometimes a dead one.
    Honestly didn't want it to be colorless but I could think of no alternative on short notice. It's a sliver because while I was considering a cat or elf tribal card, I realized slivers give keywords and that was a simple solution. 
    I went on gatherer to see what keywords they could give, left out anything with a cost, removed exalted when I realized how many there were. Card was really boring so the second ability was just to make it less of a dead card early, and with that and the first effect, the "more than 9" just seemed natural. The artwork was pulled from an aggregate wallpaper site, I reverse image searched it and couldn't find any source for it. 

    [D]isqus. 
    I need to work on my HTML, clearly.

    EDIT: Thanks, shadow.
  • Whoah! It’s @CrucibleOfHate back from the dead! Welcome back :smile:.
  • Yee. I started on many a card, but this is the only one that got past me looking for art. Honestly, if I hadn't thought of the name "Shive" I would have given up for not being able to find appropriate sliver art. Does this mean you're going to comment on my card, @shadow123
  • edited December 2020
    @CrucibleOfHate I wasn’t planning to, but I do like to comment on stuff! I’ll do so after I finish my last homework assignment for today

    Also, if it helps...
    How to post images with links:
    1. Press the </> button

    2. <a rel="nofollow" href="Card Link"><img width="256" src="Card Image"></a>

    3. Press the </> button
  • I'm following up on my own discussion because I believe it will prevail. @CrucibleOfHate I commented on your card as requested! Sorry it's not lengthy, but is a solid card.

    Here's a new creation. I watched a movie about an ancient unearthed virus that caused people to hallucinate a Deer that spoke in an evil tongue. I think it was supposed to be an omnipotent being of some sort, but I really thought it embodied 1 concept: Fortitude...

    So with this inspiration, I wanted to create a card that incarnated Fortitude by having a creature whose PT would be directly proportioned to the amount of pain and suffering you've endeared throughout your magic game... so the difference or range calculated when subtracting the total number of permanents you control from the total cards in your graveyard MADE SENSE!

    https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fortitude-5
  • @jpastor sweet idea with Fortitude's power and toughness! Only suggestion would be to get brighter art and change the first ability to "Sacrifice a creature: You draw a card and lose 1 life."

    Thoughts?
    https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/detritus-titan
  • edited December 2020
    @Temurzoa Nice card! I like all the different options you can get out of it. You will probably have to get higher quality art at some point, though.


    I’ve recently been seeing a lot of instants or flash permanents that care about unblocked attackers, or at least being intended to block a creature on etb. So, I decided to make one myself, with the theme of an angler. (The tokens were originally intended to be colorless, typeless creatures named Net.) I thought a creature that could block all the unblocked creatures attacking you at once would be cool. So, here we are. Merrow Angler.

    Also, I choose optional challenge, and in honor of the Nephilim from Guildpact, I challenge the next poster to make a four-color card.
  • ba-bump, ba-bump, ba-bumpity bumpity bumpity bump

  • This is a card I spent a long time making up its equip abilties. I wanted it to be the soldier theme, as well as balanced. Around this point, I was thinking about upping the cost because I wanted it to be quite good. But then, I realised, if I wanted its abilities to be good, then I could stop it from doing something. I thought, hmm, attack? No. It needs to attack it's a soldier's kit. How about block? Well, I thought, That seems good enough. And I based it from there. Sacrificing lives to do good, efficient attacking, blah, blah, blah. It was easy enough. A bit off theme, though, because at that time I was making lots of cards for other people.
  • @TheDukeOfPork, nice ideas. I would consider powering up Soldier's Kit a lot more, considering paying 8 mana and sacrificing a creature rarely isn't worth 1 life. Maybe the equipment could even cost 1 mana and have an equip cost of 1. I would compare it to Viridian Claw for more references.

    Thoughts on my own equipment?
  • @Termurzoa, I agree! Plus, I've seen that card, because you posted it on my equipment challenge! I do like it! So you suggesting I should make it {8}, Sacrifice a Equipped creature: You gain 1 life? I'm sorry, but I can't do that.
  • I believe they're talking about cmc 4, plus equip 3, plus mana ability 1 means you have to pay 8 mana total.
  • @TheDukeOfPork The point Temurzoa's making is that in order to gain one life from this thing's sacrifice ability, then you've got to pay a total of eight mana (four to cast the equipment, three to equip it, and one as part of the sacrifice ability). One life isn't worth much at all under most circumstances, and there are far, far better ways to get it than a massive mana investment and sacrificing a creature.

    Temurzoa's actual suggestion was significant reductions to the casting and equip costs, so perhaps it's worth rereading their comment a little more carefully.
  • @MemoryHead and @AboveAndAbout, Ok. True, that is a little underpowered, but I can cope with that.  :)
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