The Feedback Cantina
Ask one of these characters for feedback on your card.
WX-L9 aka Lex - Construct Assassin
(Wording & Formatting)
Groovy Bard - Thallid
(Balance & Fairness)
Leonitus Magnus - Leonin
(Playability & Acceptability)
Whimsywrangler Zee - Goblin Satyr
(Theme & Flavor)
Mirage Malakai - Pirate Skeleton
(Versatility & Impact)
Soundweaver Vox - Automaton
(Concept & Novelty)
Gunslinger Gandolf - Squid Rogue
(Similarities & Combos)
Saltbeard McGuffin - Homunculus
(Reasonability & Viability)
Archmagus Chroma - Wizard
(Color Pie & Identity)
Rimea Glyphweaver - Kithkin
(Lore & Context)
(Wording & Formatting)
Groovy Bard - Thallid
(Balance & Fairness)
Leonitus Magnus - Leonin
(Playability & Acceptability)
Whimsywrangler Zee - Goblin Satyr
(Theme & Flavor)
Mirage Malakai - Pirate Skeleton
(Versatility & Impact)
Soundweaver Vox - Automaton
(Concept & Novelty)
Gunslinger Gandolf - Squid Rogue
(Similarities & Combos)
Saltbeard McGuffin - Homunculus
(Reasonability & Viability)
Archmagus Chroma - Wizard
(Color Pie & Identity)
Rimea Glyphweaver - Kithkin
(Lore & Context)
Jestra the Tricksta - Human
(Fun & Entertaining)
Xpomul - Cephalid
(Secrets & Mysteries)
More May Be Added Over Time(Fun & Entertaining)
Xpomul - Cephalid
(Secrets & Mysteries)
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Open for feedback. Specify a character and don't feel bad when they rip your card apart. Some of them have a temper.
"Master Chroma, I have heard news of a powerful spiritual hermit dwelling in the icy cliffs. He exhibits quite some magical power, would you happen to have heard of him?"
Archmagus Chroma
Ah, perceive I do, the intricate construct of this carte, burgeoning initiate. Let us undertake the scrutiny of its fidelity to the chromatic spectrum.
Commendable, indeed most commendable. These faculties evince martial virtuosity, an amalgamation of alabaster's preoccupation with rigor, crimson's bellicose disposition, with a modicum of Boros concinnity. The card traverses the trajectory of the color wheel with pronounced efficacy.
Ah, ha! Now, we plumb the very core of the issue. The capacity to dispense harm, and by extension, vanquish entities, resides harmoniously within red's demesne, as does the concept of forfeiting for advantage's sake. Whilst vestiges of targeted extirpation may be shared by the alabaster faction, the practice of discarding and subsequent acquisition inclines more fervently toward crimson's impulsive predilection. In summative estimation, it constitutes a measure of straining; an alignment not perfectly consummate in terms of chromatic orthodoxy.
Mirage Malakai
I'd also like to snag a secret or two from Xpomul. ?
Leonitus Magnus
Gunslinger Gandolf
You friggin' nerds ain't got no idear how difficult it is to aim them guns when your target is blowin all kind of icy strange things at you, friggin' fingers got that good ol' frostbite or whatever it is. I can't feel me lips either. I'm not even sure I have lips... friggin' nerds. Flavor and Thematic Coherence
Don't forget about the other characters here too!
WX-L9
How may I assist you with my superior intellect and formidable combat capabilities? Query your inquiries in a way that doesn't indicate to me that you're a useless bag of flesh, and I may respond to you in a non-violent manner. Wording
Whimsywrangler Zee
Oh dear, what's the point, here? Have you no decency? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, this card is mad I tell you, mad! Can't you see it goes infinite? What's the matter with you? You fool?! ... I love it. Relation to Existing Cards
Groovy Bard
Yo, what's crackalackin' my peeps? It's your main man Groovy B. Just chillin', maxin', relaxin' all cool, you know how it is. I'm here to drop some of that funky wisdom and spread that laid-back vibe, so if you got any questions or just wanna vibe with me, lay 'em on me, and we gonna have a blast, fo' sho'! So roll it up, kick back, and let's get this party started. Balance and Fairness
just to give you a few - don't forget about Vox (Concept Execution & Novelty) - Saltbeard McGuffin (Reasonableness & Viability) - Leonitus Magnus (Playability & Acceptability) - Archmagus Chroma (Color Pie & Technical Identity) - Mirage Malakai (Overall Summary)
Xpomul
https://2191jp.wixsite.com/byebyemagic/shop
I have something I'd like to run by Vox.
I think I'd also like to pay Xpomul another visit; just one secret this time.
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(10〽️ for another secret please.)
I'd also like to ask Groovy Bard about my new composition.
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https://mtgcardsmith.com/view/moons-revelation?list=user
Yo, let me lay it down for you, my man. Moon's Revelation, it's bringin' some serious heat to the table. You're talkin' about transforming all permanents with just a couple of green mana? That's some next-level magic right there.
Somehow, people still keep seeking out feedback in the form of "it's a cool card."
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