@Fantastic_Fantasy_Cards not all versions of Garruk are green. And Garruk, Apex Predator specifically states in his first loyalty ability to put a 3/3 BLACK beast creature token with deathtouch onto the battlefield.
f) The second ability needs to cost more than one mana. For example, hunt the weak gives a creature +1/+1 until end of turn and fights target creature you don't control, and it costs FOUR mana. Your card gives itself +2/+1 until end of turn and fights target creature you don't control, and costs ONE mana. Not to mention you can use it's ability EVERY turn.
Speaking of building loyalty, I stuck myself in the game, too - not for self-aggrandizement, but simply to make a card with effects I like. But more than that, I wanted to fill a mostly unexplored niche - loyalty accumulation. I see adding loyalty in this kind of fashion as a natural extension of gaining life, so it would naturally be mostly white and green, with some representation in black. http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/luigifan-internet-wander?list=user
I just made a card for Kirby, and I'd like to know what people think of it. (I also made a card for Pommy Sea from Bomberman Tournament, and would like to know what people think of that, too.)
Also, I made a transforming Bowser card, because on closer inspection, my previous one kinda sucks.
Oh, and here's a card I made to explore an aggressive bouncer schematic (and effects triggered by damage).
Here's a card that represents telling a grand story with epic characters and setpieces.
Finally, here's a couple of cards representing fences, meant to explore the underused Fortification subtype of artifacts.
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http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/carnage-19?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/hunted-by-beasts?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/verazia-unfallen?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dream-weaving-2?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/breshudia-buddha-1?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fortified-cyborg?list=user
would love to see these cards be judged! I don't mind criticism! I'll take a look at some cards today as well.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/myriad-cobra?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/smuggler-of-castaways?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/tapewyrm?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/insectoid-dragon?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/amplitude-demon?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/honden-of-warm-memories-1?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/realization-of-futility?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/caustic-steelflesh?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/inevitability-7?list=set&set=10625
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/one-man-army-10?list=set&set=10625
Series 1 of Original Cards.
If Garruk was a green plansewalker though, shouldn't Hunted by Beasts be green?
http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=383251
Green wouldn't fit with the theme either.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/user/DankSoulsRager/sets/10966
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/weathered-mercenary?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/determined-messenger?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/dualist-duelist?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/conquering-surveyor?list=user
Naturally, they would fit better in a multiplayer environment.
Additional thoughts and feedback always welcome.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/sunhome-cadet-4
This might be a little OP.
a) It needs to cost WAY more. If you want to keep the mana cost, then tone down his abilities.
b) *fights target creature you don't control
example: http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=391858
c) you NEED to credit the artist!
d) I'd add some flavour text at the bottom
e) Put space between each ability
f) The second ability needs to cost more than one mana. For example, hunt the weak gives a creature +1/+1 until end of turn and fights target creature you don't control, and it costs FOUR mana. Your card gives itself +2/+1 until end of turn and fights target creature you don't control, and costs ONE mana. Not to mention you can use it's ability EVERY turn.
--Just some suggestions--
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/aerial-evacuation?list=user
Gwa ha ha ha! It's Bowser time, chumps! And the Koopa King's mighty flame breath is more than capable of killing your opponent in one shot, if you can build up enough loyalty to use it!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/bowser-king-of-the-koopa-4?list=user
Speaking of building loyalty, I stuck myself in the game, too - not for self-aggrandizement, but simply to make a card with effects I like. But more than that, I wanted to fill a mostly unexplored niche - loyalty accumulation. I see adding loyalty in this kind of fashion as a natural extension of gaining life, so it would naturally be mostly white and green, with some representation in black.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/luigifan-internet-wander?list=user
I like turtles. Especially when they can take craploads of damage without dying.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/snapping-turtle-6?list=user
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Should've stuck with Gruul Titan I think... Boros for the win!
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/pesudoflame
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/final-rest-1
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/proposition-from-beyond
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/one-with-nature-1
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/trumped-up-charges
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/automated-mortar?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/minigun-fire?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/unexpected-power?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/charging-squad?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/snowdrive-tau?list=user
T.A.U.: Tactical Armored Unit
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cleaning-the-threats?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/military-settlement?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cpo-rookie?list=user
C.P.O: Colonization Protection Organisation
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/civilian-colony?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/transport-3?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/karguza-the-queen-of-thing?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/swamp-thing-16?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/consuming-thing?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/chroniclers-of-fugue?list=user
Could be, not super sure on those formats. Maybe if it didn't specify "opponent controls" but just did it to everyone?
Thoughts on this peeps?
But also just my custom mechanic set in general: Counter strike Set.
Trying to make the cards playable while still retaining the book flavors.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/brienne-of-tarth-27
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/daenarys-stormborn
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/messenger-raven-6
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/the-wall-34
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/varamyr-sixskins-3
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ser-gregor-the-mountain-3
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/unsullied-5
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ironborn-reaver-1
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/bronn-8
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/melisandre-of-asshai-10
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/shadow-69
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/ramsay-bastard-of-bolton
Well, it's real strong.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/black-dragon-62?list=set&set=11509
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/water-dragon-38?list=set&set=11509
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/white-dragon-18?list=set&set=11509
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/fire-dragon-54?list=set&set=11509
here's my dragon set what do you think
Also, I made a transforming Bowser card, because on closer inspection, my previous one kinda sucks.
Oh, and here's a card I made to explore an aggressive bouncer schematic (and effects triggered by damage).
Here's a card that represents telling a grand story with epic characters and setpieces.
Finally, here's a couple of cards representing fences, meant to explore the underused Fortification subtype of artifacts.
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/wrath-of-the-woken-god?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/unassuming-inquisitor?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/encounter-the-unknown?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/looming-evil-1?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/cernunnos-the-horned-one-4?list=user
http://mtgcardsmith.com/view/the-allfather-1?list=user