Crynato Reborn feedback

Leaf777Leaf777
edited March 2018 in Custom Card Sets
I am working on a set called Crynato Reborn and was wondering what you guys thought of it and which cards you liked. I would appreciate your feedback. The main mechanics include -1/-1 counters, owls, and letter tokens, which are similar to clues.

https://mtgcardsmith.com/user/Leaf777/sets/23250

Comments

  • Arceus8523Arceus8523
    Okay, the actually cards in the set widely seem fine, I have three main issues with it:
    1. Art is incredibly distracting and in most cases sloppy. It makes it hard to take the set seriously.
    2. The set lacks mechanical continuity. All this feels like is that you've shoved cards you've made previously into a single set folder.
    3. Is there any established lore for this set or even a general plot in mind? The little description you gave at the top of your set makes this set seem like a parody or copy of Ice Age block.
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    i can change the artwork on some of them, and i also havent figured out how to change the description when it was originally going to be an ice set, i may reupload
  • Arceus8523Arceus8523
    @Leaf777
    So what is the set's story, then?
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    im not quite sure yet, i dont follow the stroy too much of sets.
  • Arceus8523Arceus8523
    @Leaf777
    A general idea of the story for your set is an excellent place to start. Then you can relate the cards both mechanically and artistically to the plot of your story.
  • jpastorjpastor
    Yeah fix the art.
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    The arts is mostly fixed, 4 cards are keeping the original art for different reasons
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    Also updated the story.
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    edited March 2018
    In case your wandering, the cards are added primarily on color, which is why we have more of some colors than others
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    If your willing, id like to know your favorite card so far, plz comment.
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    Artwork is only not changed on two cards, one because i cant find similar, another because i h ave to delete them and it has likes.
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    Also, since this is intended as a drafts set, rares and mythics are the same. They are all rares.
  • Leaf777Leaf777
    The set has reached dearly 100 cards. Plz check it out.
  • pjbear2005pjbear2005
    I will look at all the cards and tell you my favorite and I will give them a favorite
  • pjbear2005pjbear2005
    And there are some cards that should be legendary cards because they are named cards
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